Hi!
How long did it take you to animate the whole thing?
First of all, the shot is very busy, there is always something moving and its really hard to keep track of what’s going on especially with all those camera cuts. So you might want to think about giving her a few spots where she will be still and that would create some nice contrast to your shot.
also what happens around the 3 seconds in? does she jump up into the air or does she float up???
around 15 seconds her feet seem to be sliding all over the place.
Her hair seems to have a mind of its own and just do its own thing rather than follow her head around and conform to gravity (even in made up worlds gravity applies)
How did you do the background? if its just an image that you put in post production then get rid of it as it does not really sync up properly with some of your crazy camera moves… which should also be tamed down a bit so the viewer wont get so disorientated.
hope that helps and I didn’t sound too harsh.
-Yasha