Much Much better!
Now even more worried about Alfonso and the overall composition looks more balanced.
I really like it!
Glad I could help you.
You have a very interesting perspective on the concept of the game itself! In my opinion you are great at passing the whole atmosphere of the game. I would advise you to make a complete render, even if it’s too late for the contest, but do it for yourself, for your portfolio. It will be a powerful piece!
Great shot. But not enough volume and saturation. The picture seems flat and nothing to catch the eye.
Both works are made with taste! Excellent composition and character positions. 10 out of 10.