[WIP] Ghost

#1

Heyo, first time here and posting

Here is a character that I have been working on for a week or so. got most of the blockout done but here it is

#2

Wow, that’s great !

  Here are my critiques :
  - her nose looks a bit too thin
  - her poleyns and feet pose are not helping that, but her shins look too curved in profile. She reminds me of a draenei from WoW if I exaggerate.
  - her navel would need some improvement
  - her cape/thing... her piece of cape is too thick.
  - on the second frame, her third hair lock from top looks a bit weird. Otherwise her hair looks pretty cool, though not very animable (what is the right word for that?)
  - her boots obviously need improvements (for the moment they look like big socks)
  - her armor (on shoulders, arms and legs) looks a bit smooth. For my taste it would need more hardness

Can you show a closer view of her face ?

  May I ask you where this character is gonna be used ?
#3

Thanks for the comment and was away for prep for the holidays

@gamnamno : From the clothing and the armor I looked at it again and decided its wasnt the direction I liked so I am restarting how clothing because

[ul]Wanted to be somewhat of a mix of a brawler/ summoner[/ul]
[ul]Have a punk looking getup[/ul]
[ul]Stylized[/ul]

So I am concepting again and here is the close up on the face

#4

Cool work! :thumbsup:

#5

Really cool character. Also loving the face

#6

Her face looks very good, but I still think her nose is a bit too thin.

#7

For some reason this pic comes to mind when I look at this characters face…well not the nose and of course this character isn’t anime, but the feel of your character reminds me of her

#8

ahah I’m agree

#9

Here is a bit more progress, did the shirt and the arms for now, moving on to the lower body. If any suggestions that would be great

#10

Alright then did some more to this, made some handwraps and everything. Did a quick keyshot render because I want to see it rendered a bit and now onto the lower body
(the pants are a placeholder)



#11

Cool
Now that I see her in more perspective (I don’t know if the previous views were orthographic but at least they were more zoomed), her face looks finer. I preferred the previous look. Maybe you could make her face broader. She also looks younger this way.
And the kind of Gauss curve of her mouth looks too exaggerated now and not realistic.
Anyway she doesn’t really look like a fighter apart from some muscles.
In my opinion women who look like real fighters are too rare in cinema, videogames and others :

I’m not saying you should make her more like Brienne of Tarth but your girl’s face looks too… weak.

#12

Welp good news and bad news, bad news is that the files I had on this is lost or corrupted when hard drive crashed but good news is that I had a fresh perspective on this concept and I figured that I need to take 5 steps back and review what I am missing with this and what made me a little hesitant to finish this. Well first I didnt plan this out right so I concepted this again but from scratch and then this what is the result of 2 weeks of work on and off on this piece. Starting to get the flow down :slight_smile:



#13

Now that is what I’m talkin’about !
She looks amazing !
To be super picky (because I am), her lower lip looks flat on the middle and the curves inside her ear look a bit strange.
Otherwise I’m genuinely impressed.

#14

Alright mainly done with the high for the most part now moving on making the low and the second part of this little project

#15

I love the whole design from the top to the bottom!