WIP - Critique needed ASAP for university FYP

#1

Hello.

This is my current progress for my University final year project.
I had to create an animated trailer of paintings to illustrate a game I’v developed.

I desperately need some feedback over the next couple of days for my evaluation and would be extremely appreciative of anyone that can help. Be as brutally honest as you like.

The hand in is this Monday so you can see urgency is an issue…





Thanks you.
Dan

#2

Since these are meant to depict a narrative, you should give us some information about the narrative in each scene and how they relate to the overall story. Describe the premise, the situations, the emotions/moods you’re trying to convey, etc.

#3

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