WIP - After The War

[Tanbeen]

Hi, I am very new to do this.
need suggestions to improve… :sad:

I modeled the character in ZBrush. Now on Photoshop, i want to complete the whole.

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Day 1:

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Day 2:

[Lunatique]

Your values are too similar all over the image. If you squint your eyes, you’ll see that many shapes and details just blur together, without any clarity in readability of the overall tonal composition. Even if this is supposed to be an overcast, gray scene, you still need to differentiate between the different main elements in your scene so they read clearly against each other. Adjust the values so that shapes read clearly against each other–not just the figures, but also the background elements.

[Tanbeen]

Your values are too similar all over the image. If you squint your eyes, you’ll see that many shapes and details just blur together, without any clarity in readability of the overall tonal composition. Even if this is supposed to be an overcast, gray scene, you still need to differentiate between the different main elements in your scene so they read clearly against each other. Adjust the values so that shapes read clearly against each other–not just the figures, but also the background elements.

Thank you Very much
I hope soon i will fix those.

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