WIP - Adventuring

#1

Hello !

  • Any suggestions, comments or criticism welcome.)
#2

Hello there Kurasaki! :slight_smile:

Are you going for realism?, what render engine are you using?

#3

Welcome Kurasaki

You you aim for character. You need to avoid rendering with that kind of lense diformation (it’s way too low in mm)

try a 50 mm at least.

I can figure you aim for the couple Jolie/Pitt. just need to render it well

also you need to share front/side/3quarter views if you want some critics.

#4

what advise do to improve the result.

#5

Theirs armor and clothing.

Yes realistic. CHXel

#6

Magician and Warrior

#7

face from different positions

#8

Can you share your Front view also… Also maybe avoid putting so much Focal lenses distortion… It’s very weird and hard to critics.

Something like those ref are maybe focal lenses of 100mm, you could try to match that

[left]Don’t hesitate to post your reference also. I dont know what front/aside view you’re using for sculpt Angelina Jolie, we need to see
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#9

face from different positions

#10

I can’t do critics with that lense distortion. Please provide orthographic view of your heads (none distortion by the camera lense)

#11

I can’t tell if its lens distortion or your model is actually like that, if you’re not gonna fix it as Scote been suggesting, could you at least post screenshots of the viewport?, and don’t forget the references.

Are you aiming for realism, or what style are you looking for?

#12

I you aiming for realism.

#13

My guess is that you use the following …35mm image as reference for the front view. Ignoring the lens distortion of the picture made you model it wrong. But I will wait to see to orthographic views before judging yuour modeling techniques

Let me expain the lens distortion issue: You lose the ears and the main shape of the face. It’s very hard to sculpt a model without knowing that factor.

We are still waiting to see your reference pictures

#14

#15

Thanks for sharing. I create a ref head board from Angelina using google images. Maybe that will help you achieve your goal of likeness

Mainly the eyes are to big to be realistic. Also the iris his way to big and that black pupil is too open (could be realistic, if someone flash you to take a picture your eyes try to adapt and the pupil contract)

The head is a bit big also compare to the rest of the body.

Of course my 3/4 view ref didn’t have the same rotation, so you should adjust base on that.

I also don’t know the focal lense of these pictures but by rule of thumbs, I can guess a 80-120mm

cheers

#16

Thanks for the help.

#17

Sketch.___________________________

#18

If this is Angelina Jolie and he’s Brad Pitt the scale are wrong… She look 1 feet higher.

#19

I know. I was looking for them to place this bad scene.

#20

Hey. Can somebody tell somebody else?

Can the characters must be placed in the inside poznmelya, and not outside?