[WIP]a animation blocking

[liuyukang008]

hi, everyone .
this is animaton blocking I’m working on.
it’s about a guy walking on the street ,and scared by the explosive sound in the corner.

press me

[Soggycake]

I believe it works rather well. As far as staging goes, I think you can bring the camera in closer to emphasis your character more. Him and his reactions are more important than the events taking place. Frame 74 would benefit more from time to contrast your beats and add clarity to your texture. Nice work though, liuyukang008.

[liuyukang008]

I believe it works rather well. As far as staging goes, I think you can bring the camera in closer to emphasis your character more. Him and his reactions are more important than the events taking place. Frame 74 would benefit more from time to contrast your beats and add clarity to your texture. Nice work though, liuyukang008.

thanks,Soggycake.I really didn’t pay attention to the staging,and i will try to better it.

[liuyukang008]

Here is the modified one,with 2 pcs rendering of stills

Criticisms and Suggestions Welcome…
Blocking_2nd

[desmondying]

Nice!

Your last pose is twining. but other than that good job.

[liuyukang008]

Nice!

Your last pose is twining. but other than that good job.

thanks, desmondying .very helpful

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