Hi guys. Just wanted your opinion on the showreel an animation I’ve put together. Anything and everything you say will be helpful when I come to write my report.
Thanks
University project critique
hoodedpython
#2
No response so far hmm. Maybe if you don’t want to say anything you could quickly fill out this survey which should take about 2 seconds to do after watching the animations.
Phantom422
#3
Hey I really like the survey, making it simple for people. I also like the characters models and the animation reel. I think the super slow motion is a great idea for the animation. It gives you a good opportunity to show off all the details in your scene.
Watching the show reel and the animation the characters hands look off from the rest of their bodies, you might want to work on them a little.
With the animation there are two things I would point out. First are the muzzle flashes for the guns. Its not something big but they fade away too fast. I think if you slow them down a few frames it would be better.
The second one is the poses of the characters. By having it in slow motion you have a great opportunity to create dynamic poses for each character to give them more life and interest. Right now they look close off and they seem too stiff.
I like the reels its good work keep it up.
hoodedpython
#4
Thanks for you comments Phantom422 and I really appreciate you filling in the survey.
I just need 3 more artists to fill it in then I’ll be good.
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