its coming along but i feel you were going better with a night map. it allows you to give focal points to the scene and would help make those rays of light make much more sense.
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I like the general look a lot but the colors are a bit distracting. i actually like the color look of this first shot since it was way smoother all over.
You can add a pinch of color some brown on the trees reds and dull green moss color on some the the rocks. One thing i see also is the water fall. Not sure if your finished but consider that water reflects and that is where the color comes from for the most part. so the water on your new shots would reflect the color of the envio and a bit from the sky on the top of it.
On the lower shot the color composition is a lot more united and it still has rich colors.

Are you going to be able to complete this by the deadline of August 17th? If not, there is a vote in the Rules thread about extending the deadline by a week if it will help you complete this!
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