The Running Man - beginner looking for feedback


#1

To really get into Animation, I need to practice a lot. I had been working on a small animated short which obviously wasn’t turning out great due to my lack of practice (I have already made 4 animations before - can be found on the channel below). I decided to discontinue it and build my skills before doing anything like that.

So this is the Practice Animation series I am going to be continuing for a while.

I’ve seen CGTalk as a great place to receive technical feedback/critiques from top animators and even hobbyists.
I welcome all the questions and remarks or anything, really. I seek to improve my skills and I am dedicated to find and work on my weaknesses.

//youtu.be/_BXc0NFwsEM

I acknowledge I could’ve made the running sequence better by decreasing the stiffness in the spinal area and tweaking the motion of the character overall.

Thank you for staying along.


#2

Second animation in the series.

//youtu.be/9WOeiwU_068

Um, looks shit, to be honest xD

It was after I rendered everything that I noticed missing alpha channel in all the frames, lol.

Next one will be much better, I promise.