Strange Behavior (Illustration) Entry: Daniel Sanchez Limon

#41

Sweeeet work! Excellent!
You might want to decrease the bump from the backfin, just a bit!
Have a nice holiday!
:thumbsup:

#42

Hi Daniel! I love your concept and the characters. Expressions are very well done. Superb funny. Just one thing I would like to offer if you don’t mind and if you have time for testing some bump and specular options, you may decrease the bump a little bit more for the general of the orca as varma said too for the backfin and by the way if you try to increase the specular a bit, orca would be seem more moist. Otherwise everything goes excellent. Have fun and good luck! Cheers!

#43

Hi, Daniel, just popping in to agree with the other folks about the bump-mapping. IMHO, not just on the whale but all over it feels somewhat extreme. I think dropping all of your bump map numbers could help a lot. Good luck!

#44

Hilarious! the style really compliments your concept here… the sky could be a bit more saturated I think tho… I love the characters face, such a simple expression with such simple shapes but sooo effective in conveying his attitude. Congrats

#45

Hey Daniel, really nice textures, I like a lot the umbrella texture, nice detail!!:thumbsup: I´m agree with others about the bump over the whale. Great work Daniel :beer:

#46

Hi all, here again!!!
Thanks for all your comments, i noted :thumbsup:
Now i’m working on next post, maybe, he can be the finished work, but i’m not sure :scream:

#47

Software: 3ds max

Hi!
Well, here my final post to Strange Behaviour Challenge, hope you like the final image, thanks for all your crits and comments, they were a very important things to push up the illustration.

#48

Hey Daniel, thats great !! really cool mate!! The crab is a really funny and a superb detail! hahahaha :thumbsup: Congrats mate!! great work!! :beer:

#49

lovely characters and a funny idea! Nice textures on the whale and I like the lighting too.

Congratz on finishing this piece and wish you the best of luck in the voting…

#50

I like it , specially those expression from characters faces. great!

#51

Well, I have to say you catched the cartoony look of the kid and the dumb expression of the whale in the final picture and that’s very remarkable!!

Congratulations for a really fun piece with a great finish, and the crab was just the chocochip topping of this sweet treat!!!

If I can add anything to this coment would be that you could add a little shine on the lifesaver in photoshop, but that’s just a wee thing…

Best luck Daniel, thanks for the ride.:thumbsup::thumbsup::thumbsup:

#52

hahahah great! cool and hilarious job:D I wish you good luck with the challenge =)

#53

Congratulations! The details like crab and expressions are all very well done.
Good luck with this hilarious work! Cheers!

#54

Yep, I agree with the others. It’s a delightful illustration. Congratulations and good luck! :thumbsup:

#55

CONGRATULATIONS…

i love these little details.

#56

Congratulations with a very successful and expressive final render! You are very fast,
and of course effective! You handled those bumps really good!
All the best for the voting and hope to catch up in a future challenge!
:applause:

#57

wow, you are fast! congratulations its a great piece, and good luck on the challenge!

#58

Thanks to all for your comments and good desires, I’m glad to know your opinion about the illustration :scream:
I had to be fast because the work and the family don’t leave me so many time :shrug:

#59

Cute :slight_smile: and has a funny atmosphere
Congratulations!

#60

Wow. That 's just fabulous. Ok I’m a little too demonstrative but I didin’t saw your picture before and there’s all I really love.
I have a tiny crit anyway. The buoy seems to be transparent as we see a apart of the whale beside but we don’t see the end of the arm of the little boy.
Otherwise :thumbsup: