Strange Behavior (Illustration) Entry: Daniel Sanchez Limon

#21

Yes, at the beginning the child was a man ( this if it’s something strange :eek: ) , if you see the first sketch you can see a bald man but, after several reasons, i decided to change it for a child… maybe was a wrong decision, i don’t know :shrug:

#22

I like the wee kid, and ,hey! it is whale he’s pulling aroud. That’s weird!:smiley:

#23

Software: 3ds max

Here a proud boy!
Well, this is the first composition render, coming more accurate scene :wink:

#24

This is really coming along! Nice character design, thank their expressions are both great! Compositionally, there might be a little room to move the boy over a bit to the left. It would show us that flipper a bit more, but most importantly, it might be nice to avoid the two main vertical elements in the piece - the rope and the collar - from sticking up right out of the center of the boy’s head. Anyhow, just a thought.

Are you going to texture now, or spend soem time modeling the environment? Good luck!

#25

Software: 3ds max

Hy Walrus!
Thanks for your comments, i will try to move the boy to put outside the vertical lines of the image, I only turned the boy a little.
Now i would like to start the textures.

#26

Yeaah! Way to go Daniel:bounce:… I like how these 3d characters turn out! Can I say Im more crazy on the guy’s pose on the first untextured model you made? (the proud boy I mean)… Also I think that the whale’s tounge would look nicer if you make it wider and more flatter same as what you did on the pencil art…Cant deny its looking really cool man!:thumbsup:.

-Raffy

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#27

wow, great entry! The design is very cool, congratulations!
I agree with malrus, maybe a few changes on the composition an this piece will be ready to rock!

#28

Hi all, thanks for all your comments
If my work allows me I’ll try to do all the improvements that you propose me :thumbsup:

#29

Hi, Daniel - I noticed that you rotated your main character around a bit. I think he looks fine either way, but one of the things about his old position that woked particularly well - and even better in the previous post! - was that we could see a lot more of the curve of the inner-tube, so that it looked a lot more like… well, an inner-tube! The more we see it edge on, the less it looks like what it is and the more it starts looking like a hot water bottle. Whichever way you orient the boy, I hope you’ll consider rotating the tube around to that we can more clearly see its defining torus shape.

Oh, and nice to see the ground and some starting colors!

#30

Software: 3ds max

Thanks again for comments.
Here another image with some changes, you can see that i have begun with the textures :slight_smile:
Walrus! you are right about the inner-tube, thanks a lot :thumbsup:

#31

Hey Daniel, wow, I like a lot your models !! the kid expression is great!! :applause: and nice rope texture! Great work!! I cant wait for see more updates!! :thumbsup:

#32

Very cool conc ept, why do whales beach themselves… I never thought of that, I should have done something strange like that, oh well.

Very nice work, jeep it up and good luck!

Best,

Ken David Matheson

Strange Behavior
http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=4602692#post4602692

#33

As I came very late on that challenge, I didn’t see yet all the thread and I just discoverd this one… So cute ! I really like the attitude of the little boy. For my part, I do prefer the little boy than the adult, even if it’s not as strange for a boy to want to play with a whale… The ombrella on the top of the whale is the most funny part, I think…
I would like to help you with my comments, but alas, I don’t know anything about 3D…
The result seems on a good path, however :wink:

#34

I like it all, I think it will turn out very well.

My image is 2d only not 3d, so you could comment if you like.

Thanks,

KD Matheson

Strange Behavior
http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?f=225&t=525225

#35

nice update man! keep it up!!

#36

Very cool Whale! I like it a lot!
The style of the render is great!
Keep up!
:slight_smile:

#37

nice character design and modelling. This is coming along very well - Good work!

Gord

#38

Thanks to all for your contribution in this thread, all your comments are welcome, now I’m working in the textures, soon another update, hope you like it :wink:

#39

Software: 3ds max

Here the last update, now i’m working on details and back ground, after that, i would like to work in lighting, render and post, but i’m thinking that i can’t work the next week in the image because… today i start the holidays! :bounce:

Hope you like it :slight_smile:

#40

jeeejje, i like the whale too much, and the kid, you did well the transition from sketch to 3D.
need more work in the background, good luck