Story Concept - Doorman


#1

This is a concept for a short animated film, about a doorman, whose hat is stolen. The style both thematically and visually would be that of a kind of Pixar-ish story-centric comedy. It’s mainly to be used as a demo reel piece as a character animator, but I would like to get the story right, and keep people interested. Any critique at all is greatly appreciated.
The outline is attached.


#2

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