Steampunk Myths and Legends Entry: heri irawan

#81

great idea with Tooth Fairy :thumbsup:

#82

Cool, another tooth fairy!!
Great concept, I really like the fairy…very nice.

#83

Hey Heri, These propellents are much better! lighting is very nice in the last one,keep in it…and Good luck!

#84

I really like the lighting of this piece, good work.

#85

another mood-color

#86

I really like the mood of the last one! Nice composition and the lighting captured!
Congrats!

#87

Very nice piece. The colors are just great. It looks like you’re close to completion :slight_smile:

#88

i just want to show you both images from my steampunk- cg challanges.
what do you think ? and which one do you like more…?


#89

Stymphalian birds(wolves)

Thanks to everybody who support me a lot with the feedback.:slight_smile:

#90

i totally love the second one. yet both of them are amazing!

#91

Composition of the birds is much stronger than the tooth fairy. I really like it and declare it a winner.

#92

Great artworks. Hard to say for me which one is the best. The first one is the one with the more dynamic composition, but I really like the story of the second one, it’s a little bit more extraordinary.

#93

Hi Andre,Michael and Jackzang thanks a lot for your feedback,i think i will just take a break and have a look again later.:slight_smile:

#94

Great work Heri,

i like both of them,
but as somebody said before,
the second one is more interesting in term of an idea,
but first one has more action and dynamic.

It is your turn to choose one :slight_smile:
but i vote for the fairy!

#95

I’ll vote for the second one. It’s just a more interesting piece in my opinion.

#96

Hey Irawen I personally prefer the tooth fairy. Yes the first piece is more dynamic, but there is a better sense of focus in the tooth fairy piece. It has a strong lighting that pushes the focus on the fairy and keeps him in the spotlight. The bird piece has a lot happening in terms of detail, which allows me to appreciate each section. However, there isn’t anything connecting the bird to me (and the larger audience) so it’s as if it’s just posing, though it is in action. If there were a person or a monster to the right of the piece engaging it then the piece would pack more action and play with the foreground a bit more. This is what the tooth fairy has, the connection to the audience because of the background. The fairy has a relationship with the man in back, and the contrast between light and dark, the facial expressions and bodily expressions add to the amount of detail in this piece. That overall connection with the audience is what I’d say makes it a better piece as I’m able to engage it and almost feel as if I’m the one with the tooth. Just my opinion though, but they’re both incredible pieces. All the best to you and I hope this helps :slight_smile:

#97

great painting, colours are just wonderful. i love the angle and the depth of the 1st 1.

#98

Thanks a lot for the support by writing me a feedback !

#99

I like the idea behind the tooth fairy! But I find that the other one is more detailed…
I can’t decide :hmm:
Amazing work, by the way :applause:

#100

looked at your drawings again,

they are really amazing,
it is amazing how you manage colour through your working progress,

Good luck to you,
you deserve a prize :slight_smile: