Steampunk Myths and Legends Entry: heri irawan

#41

It is great. It is hard to believe that those sketch lines turned out into such a clean rendering. Maybe you should try to add more components to the background.

#42

wow…

really very impressive

#43

great lighting, great composition.

#44

cc are welcome

#45

another mood color

#46

nice… greenish one best

#47

Hey Hiri,

I’m telling ya… It’s hard to pick which color palette looks the best. They both work really well. I’m loving the illustration thus far… Very impressive work. If I had to choose… I’d go with your second color palette. I like it because there’s the cool green in the foreground and the warmer colors by the beast behind him. it gives a nice contast.

:thumbsup: Nice job.

#48

hey man ! my jaw is on the floor watching your work at your website . r u a human or a visual production robot .

wow ! so inspiring ! so motivational !

i am a 1 third of a pixel right now !

i stay with the first one it seem more steampunkish

ps: no doubt you are one of the winners and my favorite artist of the year

jaw

#49

Thanks!i also feel the same with you, i will work with the second color to go more detail

#50

thanks so much for your big compliment!yes, i am a visual production robot, my working time is more then for other think,but right now i try to be in steampunk challage.hope i have time to go for more detail

#51

That is that i’m talking about!!:cool:Amazing!
Good luck!

#52

wow this is great … but can’t really decide between green or red, both have its appeal…

#53

Thanks a lot!i think i will stop first and wait for more feedback…one more,thanks everybody who take time for giving me some feedback.

#54

Cant believe is have only just discovered this entry! The way it is laid out is really exciting. Those wolves remind me of the armoured bears in ‘Northern Lights’.

#55

Thanks! i just have a look how the armoured bears in 'Northern Lights look like, i think is difficult to make really original,because nearly everything already exists somehow.
the wolves i did is not using a costum but his organ is steampunk.

#56

absoluteley fantastic!! great dynamic poses! great light! can´t point out a single thing that bothers me!
You definitely deserve one of the awards!

#57

Thanks for the comments.:love:

#58

That looks awesome, great sense of movement, congrats!

#59

Just small detail upgrade

#60

Hi irawan, I have been following you work on this one since I saw you design and have to say this is probably my favorite entry so far. I saw that you updated your previous image with a new one that you had added some new details to the bird and wolf and background. I have been flipping back and forth between the one you had posted before this update and comparing them. I like the added contrast in the image,the extra detail on the birds hair on his head, lighting on the rocks, and the wolf’s face.

I am not sure if I am digging the the eyes(and teeth) in the darknes though because to me they are kind of destracting and take away from the main focal interest of the piece. The more I look at it I don’t know if I am telling myself they are ok but my first look at the new image posted definitely brought my eyes up to those in the darkness. I have tried looking at the different versions from a distance to see what effect that has on what my eyes focus on but I am not sure I am just accepting the eyes in the darkness the more I look at the composition. Maybe you could dim them a little or something or post a version with them, without them and dimmed; just a suggestion. Maybe some other members could chime in and give their opinion on them. Best of luck with the contest, I’m pretty certain you will win one of the awards.