Steampunk Myths and Legends Entry: Brittany Richardson


#21

thanks everyone for the encouragement :slight_smile:

And thanks, Theresa. You really hit the nail on the head. The lack of story in the first one I think is what was bothering me so much. But like you suggested, I may go ahead and finish it outside of the challenge. But for now, I’ll start developing the second idea further. Or even do another part of the story.


#22

the first concept really has a great feel

im looking forward to what the 2nd will evolve too


#23

Indeed very cool concepts! I really liked the first one’s composition and poses, to me it felt much more different than the classic poses you usually see for this myth.

Although the second one looks like it will be using this type of pose, I must admit I’m am very intrigued by your idea of Persephone’s box! :slight_smile: Looking forward to seeing where this will go! Best of luck!


#24

Hey Brittany,

Really cool concept, and the sketches are great!! Like a lot. My favorite is your vertical composition, has a great feeling and mood. Again, cool works!! and looking forward for more updates! :smiley:


#25

Gr8 concept…truly has emotion in it…looking forward to see this completed!


#26

Ooooh! Do Persephone’s box, all in a really classical style…BUT… with steampunk evil elements rushing out of the box! :love:


#27

Thanks for the feedback, everyone. It’s really awesome to hear what you all think - it helps a lot. So, I guess it’s decided. I’ll be working on the second idea. I need to come up with a strong compostition I like while keeping with the idea of classical poses.


#28

I’m very curious on how this will develop. I like your style a lot.

Best regards


#29

Hi Brittany,

I prefer the flying approach the best. The composition is stronger and the flying devices are very attractive. I love the box from the horizontal composition but it is a distracting element at left side fighting in balance with the protagonists at right and I think the attention should concentrate on them. Maybe you could mix both ideas? I was imagining a camera angle from above with them both flying in the foreground and a huge steamy box below them on the ground. Don’t know, it’s just an idea and maybe it do not fit exactly on the myth but this is the place to let our imagination free!

Good luck!


#30

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