Splash art Crit wanted


Hi! Just looking for general ways to make this particular image better. Don’t want to redraw the girls position but willing to add to her (brighter light, highlights ect) I’m not too certain on the metal on her wings and I think its taking away from the image so any thoughts on ways to approach that would also be helpful. I like her simple design and don’t want to change it too much either. Feel free to paint over. Thanks!!