Originally posted by BiTMAP
well for a first I’d say its good, Its got a good style and your brush strokes are ok, the thing your lacking is a solid shape to the apple, it doesn’t seem to actualy sit in theoretical space at all… So i guess in normal terms, PErspective is off.
Yeah i know… it’s basically not drawn on a surface, and i got worked up in some shadow detail that wound up getting the bottom of the apple all screwed up shading… so i kinda fixed it the best i could, but i wasnt all happy with the bottom of it 
But hey it’s my first attemp, so all in all i’m happy with it :DGonna do much better in the future i hope.
Thx for the critique