space suit male and female

#1

[IMG]hello there,

I am sharing two Wip that I made for my portfolio. I don’t care about how this evolve as long as
the images get stronger and stronger as they get criticized. Initially both character could have been for a same project. but now they split. the cyborg is definitely serious and dark(would fit in an alien movie), and the girl make me think she could be some sort of pin-up…(or agent in Austin Power). Some critic the fact that the girl has a too cute face to hold a gun… but…Sonia blade(Mortal Kombat), Samus(metroid )and others are fighters and still have a cute face. what do you think about this this ? Of course I am also interested in any other critics you may have in mind. Thanks

#2

I like them both, real nice armor. :slight_smile:
As you mentioned about the girl, I think it might be the expression on her face. It looks like she doesn’t want to hold the gun. Well it looks like that to me, I might be wrong though.
Real nice armor btw, keep up.

#3

The girl is very very…cute, great outfit too.
You may need to had more details in her eyes (highlights, pupils), in short give it more depth by adding more contrast.
Whom said something about the way she holds her gun, that I don’t really agree with, it gives her a bit of feminine touch.
But I am not really fond at all with the weapons design, but I don’t know if these are definitive versions, so I will wait and see.
About the cyborg, I would rather go with a two colors scheme rather than three colors.
Keep up with the good work.
BTW: your smoke is really cool!

#4

I would consider these pieces done - but if you want to push them further, I would work on the first one’s hands, and add an environment, and work a little more on the lighting on the second. The gun is in shadow, and it feels awkward.

But, you have great poses, great color, good detail, and they feel finished to me.

#5

yes, there had been various opinion regarding the femininity of the character…I may keep it that way. thanks, for the critic any way :slight_smile:

#6

Thanks, yes will do that because I want to move on…:slight_smile:

#7

you would remove the green light and replace with orange ones? Thanks

#8

The second image doesn’t show–it’s dead on my end.

As for how cute a female fighter should be, I think it’s a ridiculous thing to say that fighters can’t be attractive. How pretty someone is and how well they can fight have nothing to do with each other, and aren’t mutually exclusive.

#9

Hey everyboby! I would consider these two characters done despite some few remaining controverted critics. A Hand and wrist has been improved as BillyWj suggested. I am use to work a lot my rendering with photoshop, but usually it is more on background or game map, so these are my first painted character on my portfolio. I am posting the final version here , Thanks the CGsociety community!


#10

This is also what I thought. Also other character I had in mind when working on this were : Samus from Metroid, Sonia Blade from MK(more serious), a secret agent from Austin power … and seduction can be a weapon too any way

#11

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