Soulmate

#1

It’s my last picture SOULMATE.
Tools used: Photoshop CS, Wacom Grapphire, Pencil&Paper for sketch.

I think there is too much empty space around the neck, maybe an amulet will fit, but decided as final for now.

#2

Ok, the picture is there :slight_smile: I just panicked a little.

#3

Nice picture, but the eyes look strange.
The eyes lack the “tear canal”, or whatever it’s real name is…The tear canal is the red stuff in the corner of the eye close to the nose, where the tears comes from. Then maybe you want to add some tiny veins in the eye.

#4

The fact that she is so skinny makes her missing collarbone look
really really odd.
I would not use an amulet … and rather work on a collarbone.

Her eyes are too large if you want to get technical but i guess
you were going for a more stylistic aproach.
But yeah i think its good but there is a few things missing that makes
it look a little odd.

#5

Thanks, for both crits. I will work on the collarbone look as well as on the tear canal. Yes, the eyes a little bit larger but as you suspected i want them to be like that :slight_smile:

If we are talking about the few things missing, the major problem is when i am working on a painting for several hours i lost my discernment about the picture as a whole. But exactly for that particular reason were this crit forums created. Thanks once more time.

#6

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