Hey NR43, thank you! hehe my scanner is fixed now though it wasnt exactly broken I just…ehm…it wasn’t ahem plugged … ( ._. I know, shoot me)
Anyway I just scanned this two 
Hermes
And
Jupiter and Callist0 by Rubens, though I didn’t finished Jupiter oh well.
Give him a spear and an aspis and you’ll have a hoplite
The first that I can crit is the linework. It is awry, I mean, places the one and the same line is drawn repeatedly which gives not a nice effect. Try drawing confident, long lines. I read that it’s good to start with only straight lines, even it they will be curved later (or are curved if drawing from reference or from life). It’s great to see you working on the linework, that is very important. I was always amazed by the linework of Zhuzhu. I’m sure you’ve seen his thread and the work posted there. See how little lines he uses.
Hey razz, thank you for the crit I really appreciate it. I’ll start working on those clean lines
Well here is a simple eye I did in photoshop just to try that coloring the greyscale method of painting
nice coloring
If you paint an eye from a viewpoint this close, you really ought to add more details you know. Make it anatomically correct 
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