Sketchbook Thread of Salubri

[Salubri3i]

Salubri3i,

The main thing I think is that her left arm should be significantly enlarged, which would require you to enlarge the canvas size to accomodate it’s larger size, or else run the arm off of the page.

Okay. I will extend it a bit more. The problem I’m having with the left arm is how to show the perspective correctly. she has it bent a little away from the viewer. I will extend the canvas.

Her left breast is looking slightly large (it’s nearly the size of her face)

Oops.

Okay. I’ll work on those areas. I’m also trying to work on the face a bit more to get it to look right. There’s something about it that looks weird right now. Fortunately Cavematty pointed the issues and I’m also seing the rest with regards to the facial features. Hopefully it’ll all be done by tomorrow. Thanks Rebecca. :wavey:

[cok3]

Keep up the good works pare! Great improvements in your paintings!

[razz]

Hey, you’ve pushed the painting pretty far, but there’s loads of more to work on, eh? I’ll be happy to see that. This must have tought you a lot about values.

[Salubri3i]

[i]<waves the magic wacom and yells “Ressurect-O Thread-O!” >

[/i]I know. I’m lazy. I’m trying to change. Promise.

So here’s what I’m working on for now. Critiques are encouraged and very much welcome. Particularly the hands and arms part. If someone can help me with the folds too that will also be great. I have no idea what I’m doing when it comes to clothes. :banghead:

[anandpg]

Hey Ryan! long time, no see!!? where have you been?

btw, beautiful drawing!

[Salubri3i]

Hey Ryan! long time, no see!!? where have you been?

btw, beautiful drawing!

burried under a ton of paper work. officemates have to search thru the paper and book stacks on my desk just to find me.

thanks! i’ll try to update more often. try being the operative word.

[NR43]

nice thread you’ve got going here Salubri3iI also hope you will finish the nude painting

[Salubri3i]

yup. i will. i actually stopped working on that coz i got frustrated with the hands before i even got swamped at work. however, i managed to take appropriate reference pics a few days ago. i’ll work on it after the current piece or if i manage to squeeze it in between.

man do i suck at painting hands and feet. bleah… :wise:

[NR43]

bah me too
I’m afraid the only way we can get better is to draw loads and loads of them…

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