Beautiful stuff! 
The thing I find a bit wanting has something to do with the axes of the face, which seem somehow a bit off / not parallel - here’s a demo I did for OFDW 020 which may show better what I mean:
[left]Where are you currently taking classes? It looks as though they are teaching you very well.
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Wow you should be able to get into any school! The only thing that needs a lot of work is your cartooning, if your going into animation. I find simplification difficult to do, but the results are worth it.
Wow your last name is blitz… Are you related to Bruce Blitz?
Thanks Rebecca, yeah your right, the nose is going up while the eyebrows and eyes are going down. Im currently studying here http://www.liafa.com/aboutliafa.htm
currently only once a week:sad:
Thanks a lot Womball! haha Bruce Blitz! sorry but I am not related to him although I did have his book when I was younger.
Ah, I think you’re very lucky to be attending an atelier at your age. No chance for more than once a week? Seems like they offer very solid training.
Well its bit of a drive for my mom but next week when (hopefully) pass my road test I wil probably be able to go more.
That’s lovely! Very sensitively drawn with a very consistent use of strokes. Overall, really impressive stuff.
I still recommend overemphasizing those parallel axes, even if they are not there in the real face that you are looking at - I think doing so might bring your drawing up that one extra notch to put it over the top.
Hopefully you’ve seen these links.
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