Sketchbook Thread of Makaron


#1

a start on “me”… done a lot of “blobs” and smudge them a bit… and I wonder how to progress… should I smudge out the pixels to a nice skin and hair? or? what kind of brush to use? help me… :slight_smile: please :slight_smile:

mostly for the practice I do this… I never paint humans and need the shadow and light pratice too… I´m using Photoshop CS2

CYa :wavey:


#2

Great start Mona! I really like the lighting you got going for the right shoulder and top of the head - maybe take it even further by darkening the other parts?


#3

Mona,

Great to see your Anatomy Thread up! :slight_smile:

I think this piece is looking really great so far ~ the main areas I would recommend working on are the shoulders, whose axes look a bit off. Otherwise, things are looking really good with this piece. If you like, I am happy to do a paintover showing where the shoulder axes might be placed.

Cheers, :slight_smile:

~Rk


#4

Hallo Gunilla… and you right as usal… more shadows… put a post-it up beside the don´t merge now… shadows… is not only light in the world… :slight_smile:

and thanks Beckie… yes please, do a paint-over :slight_smile: the funny pose comes from that fact I sit in my chair like a “bag of nuts” and since I use the webcam to look at myself when I did it, no wonder the pose is off… :blush:


CYa :wavey:


#5

hej Mona , Great Value work you are getting better and better :smiley:


#6

Wow! That’s a great start Mona, I really like the lighting on the second one:thumbsup:

But where’s the gp?:stuck_out_tongue:


#7

Hi, Mona,

Sorry for the belated reply! :slight_smile:

Here is a review of your piece:

[left]Makie, one thing I must tell you is that if you plan to go to an art college, what they really want to see in a Portfolio is Traditional and not Digital work. Do you have a college advisor / can you talk to an art teacher who can give you guidance as to what to include in a Portfolio?

Cheers, :slight_smile:

~Rebeccak
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#8

tack jannis… :slight_smile:

daddymack: my GPs don´t like sitting in the lap… :cry: they running like mad on the floor tho… but that keep them slim… and they do have their own thread :wink: but nice to see you like the light…

and thanks Beckie… :bounce: now I see what you mean… let´s see what I can do here…
but I´m streching now in my chair… pull the shoulders back… gonna keep that paintover to remind me to sit in a better posture…
and for art college plans, don´t have any such plans just now… just a hobby… I have some things I did with tradional pen and paper, but can´t show those for advice, my scanner won´t work…


#9

Yahoo !! here’s the Mona Anat. thread !!

Looking real cool already ,
can’t wait for more !! :bounce:

cheers ,

-Zapan


#10

hey, what a nice WIP GPQ!! the shadowing looks very nice so far…I’ll keep an eye on this one! …the journey continues!!


#11

hallo Zapan… thanks… and sorry for no elfs… just me… haha… :stuck_out_tongue:
thanks you shakes… its fun to play with shadows and light… but I´m kind of “timid” don´t dare to do too much… a shadowchicken s the word maybe… :smiley:

and some more smudge and some minor changes to the shoulders… and soon time to do the fur… ops… :blush: the hair… stranded out some of it and later on getting into details…
and playing with some colors too…

CYa… :wavey:


#12

This looks really cool! I would check the cheek structure and the location of the mouth. They seem to be too far down.


#13

Hey Mona!

I’ve just discovered your new thread, cool!:bounce: A new outbreak of creativity after the challenge!:slight_smile:
This looks like a great start, I’m looking forward to see your progress with this piece!

-sabrina


#14

Hiya Mona,

I echo everyone’s sentiments here ~ I think this is coming along really nicely. Keep up the good work! :slight_smile:

Cheers,

~Rebeccak


#15

Like your lighting gif!!


#16

hallo womball… been looking at that and changed a little bit, thanks :slight_smile:
Sabrina… thanks you and welcome :bounce: gotta try a human sometime… haha
Rebeccak: thanks … :bowdown:
shakes: when I did the GIF… I sat here and said to myself, lights on… lights off… and when it didn´t work the first time I asked myself… where did I put the lightbulbs. the lights won´t go on… :surprised

I better get back and smudge more skin… this is fun, every little wrinkle just dissapear… Photoshop is more effective than wrinklecreams… :wink: haha
CYa:wavey:


#17

a little nosejob


#18

It looks better, but I think you could still trim off half of that distance. I don’t think the distance between the nose and mouth is that great.


#19

great to see you working in here mona. the start looks great.
about the mouth, yeah it actually looks like its a bit low in the position wich could come from the looking down. also, the distance usually is a bit bigger there if somene has a button nose :slight_smile:

highlighting on the lips/chin-area in the right softness and mass definition probably clear the angle :slight_smile: (had to fight with the same in my desire piece) looking forward to your next update :slight_smile: keep up the great work Mona :slight_smile:


#20

Mona,

Looking good! I think the left shoulder is a bit bright, but the definition of the right is coming along nicely. Have been out of town for a bit, my apologies for the delayed reply! Looking forward to your update. :slight_smile:

Cheers,

~Rk