The result isn’t terrible Cisco.
Think positive: the result can be improved.
For instance, the cyan background part will be less overwhelming when it’s less saturated.
Shadows have colors too, think about that one 
Looks like you’re working pretty fast. If so, slow down.
Think about each stroke in terms of tone, hue, shape and edge.
Dead ways are for quitters, and you’re not a quitter.
So in short: slow down, think positive but keep going 











