I’ve been working on this small project on the side for our rush video for my fraternity. I was wondering if I could get some feedback from you guys. Thank you!
Short Inception Clip
beagean
#3
Hey,
Did u smooth out your tangency in the graph editor for the camera, cause it seems to hit points where it seems you’ve put your keys. The buildings look insane, great work.
Ben,
p.s
No one critiques my work on here either 
R1c00
#4
yeah your camera does something funky at around 10 or 11 sec. It looks like maybe you have an extra key in there? I think that for camera animation, the less keys you have to get what you want the better. Extra keys sometimes throw the tangents off a bit and for camera animation that can equal a big change in what you see in the shotCam.
rasamaya
#5
my wee little brain says whats happening when the buildings are dropping.
Its hard to tell if they are dropping or if its perspective.
Perhaps Making it a little abrupt and giving the camera some shake.
I think you should show the rest fading with the P too. Or end the P sooner. Just a few frames should work.
Perhaps remove that repetitive box shape on the roof top. I know that sounds vague, but it stands out among the instances and makes the duplicates stand out more.
Looks good though.
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