Short Animation WIP Critiques needed please


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Hey everyone,

I haven’t posted here in such a long time. The last time I posted was years ago. Anywho back on topic. I’m redoing my demo reel, for getting a job in the games field. Since my last demo reel wasn’t enough for me to get in. I’ve talked to someone who suggested restarting everything. Work my way from the bottom up. I’ve been working on the piece for a week now, it’s in the blocking stage.

What I’m trying to say is, I would like someone to critique it for me. Or even red line the poses so that I can redo them. The facial expression will come later on, when I add more to the animation.

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