Security Guard

#1

Heres some of the animation I did at at Design School,

I would really appreciate all the feedback, please note theres a variation of the Theif animation which I think is more interesting but would like other peoples opinion.

Thanks in advance

Theif animation links :

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_profilepage&v=dlttmHYtiyc

Theif variation :

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YjoZlum_EJY&feature=player_profilepage

Security Guard :

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_profilepage&v=hOs8yOg_914

#2

Hi, I love the heist set up.

I prefer the thief variation because his sneak is more exaggerated and it fits in with the character design and story.
Generally there is a lot of twinning going on in your 3 reels. And some poses lack anticipation like when the thief gets caught.

There are 3 spot where the posing will benefit if you film yourself act it out. 1. When the thief opens the door and peeks, 2.when the thief hides from the bot and 3.the security guard reel.

Its still not quite there yet, but you will improve with your next reel for sure.

#3

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