Scene: Something Dangerous

#21

Sorry, “she” is a “he” :smiley: His is calles “Inky”.

#22

ooh…but inky looks feminie!!
inky pinky panky!!

#23

Hehhe, looks like an extra from finding Nemo - which is a good thing.

Awesome work, I love the lighting and the comical eyes, very cute:scream::thumbsup:

#24

Here an extra picture of the barrel

#25

I couldn´t prevent myself from posting that picture. Imo it´s quite funny :smiley:

Ok, keep on rating.

!!!For those of you who rate clearly under the average, please tell my why. Actions like rapidly decreasing the average helps nobody!!!

C ‘n’ C furthermore welcome

#26

the green textur of inky does not really fits. but it seems to be an early version and it doesn´t matter. nice perspective!

#27

You should post a barrel tutorial, your barrel looks pretty good

#28

A barrel tutorial…hmmm. the barrel of itself isn´t the problem. the damgage needs work. How I´ve modeled that could you see on the wire frame. The rest is texturing. Sounds comical, but it´s so :smiley:

#29

Great Work!!

Nice Concept, Lightening and textures.

Maybe you could add some fog to improve the underwater look.

It’s just a sugestion. Real cool image!!!

#30

gr8t work :)…booth character and enviroment, are u going to do any kind of animation with it?

#31

Good work indeed Maniac, i like that look, that style and so on.
But, you know that the picture is good, so lets concentrate on the less good things which would be

  • the reflections on the head on both sites look the same, one brighter, one darker, this is the most bothering tit (tit=thing i think) g
  • the tenctacles which the other people have mentioned here.
    All other stuff is subjective.

At last, i´ll like the picture.
Maybe you should call him (based on the barell) radio-oct-ive
, oct-an or oct-avius. :wink:

#32

@Thiago_Pires: there´s already fog. The green background and the camera distantly objects are extremely effected by the fog.

An animation is not planned but never say never :smiley:

#33

[left]First of all: I like the Pic, its a nice piece of artwork.[/left]
[left]Besides the technical Aspects there is room of improvement.[/left]

[left]The Image has a meaning for the Viewer, but it just looks like dozens, hundrets, thousands, millions of images in i-net worldwide. When You as an artist really wanna make a diffrence then You have to bind the Viewer to your image. Every object, every component have to have a logicall connection to other objects, components in the image.[/left]
[left]I mean, the only one sure connection I can find is the water und you character…because he needs it to live in it…then the barrel…poison…danger for water, danger for him.IMHO that is not enough, the Viewer dont has the feeling the Character on this pic has a real emotion, is scared or something…he just looks funny, ehehe.[/left]

[left]Maybe that is what you want to show…maybe that is ur point. If so…you achieved ur [/left]
[left]goal.I think a real good pic need to tell a story, I know that You indeed know what I mean.[/left]

[left]When You really wanna show the human influence by poison stuff to our Nature or Livings or Animals then show it more dramatic…e.g. Why ist the vegetation not in bad shape? Why comes no liquid poisen stuff outta the barrel? Why You dont put the char in a more dramatic pose?[/left]

[left][suggestion][/left]
[left]Think of that situation…the barrel in background is no barrel but fragments of a sunken prisson transport/vessel (u could put a sign or font on it)…the char wears a dirty shirt with black and white stripes and has on one of his legs/tentacles a chain with a big heavy weight looking sphere connected to it. Now ur char could look happy, guilty, scared because he did it…he managed it to escaped…he survived…and now…he is caught again…not by law but by a poison barrel…the gras is dieing, he will die too after starving or [/left]
[left]whatever.[/left]
[left]Such connecting elements IMHO make the diffrence and create a connection not only [/left]
[left]between the scene objects but between the Image and the Viewer.[/left]

[left]btw: Next time…please create the vegetation by urself, its really better to have all done by urself in a piece of artwork like ur work here. It also helps to identify urself with the image.[/left]

[left]ok…I dont wanna end up in standart blabla, so I shut up and fear the reply ;-)[/left]

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[left]I give it 4 stars[/left]
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[left]MfG,[/left]
[left]Ray[/left]

#34

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