SCAD Statement of purpose and portfolio


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Hi dear friends
I want to apply to SCAD university(Atlanta) and I want to know, your opinion and advice.
I studying software engineering in my university but i’ve been trying to learn animation from more than 2 and half years ago at the same time. So I read 3dsmax’s help and watched some tutorials in internet .I made this animation my firs animation 1 year ago.
1- please tel me your opinion about my portfolio. http://amir989.cgsociety.org/
see my animation at first please.(The robot)

2-SCAD asked a Statement of purpose which can’t be longer than 500 words. Here is mine :
“ I have been learning animation from 2 and half years ago with watching tutorials in internet and reading software’s help .After one year, I made my first short 3d animation. Which FullSail university offered me 40,000$ scholarship. And Pond5 got me 200$ as one of Animago award sponsor. And I got job offer from my country’s international television and companies . Then I tried to learn sculpting with Mudbox which I did. And I was my computer graphic teacher’s TA. After lots of searching in internet and forums, I understood SCAD is the best for me. ”
It is very important to me, to know your opinion about my Statement of purpose.

thanks