Robert Lariz Bunny Rabbit V_4.2


#1

Hello all,
Here’s my latest version. I fixed the grass along with some spill on the neck. Hope you all like it and I do expect some pointers…

Cheers
Robert


#2

Nice! Much better grass.

The composition looks boxy, only looking at the side of the rabbit. Maybe you could swing the camera around so we see more of the front of his head. Some eye highlights might also help bring it to life, and a little color in the inner ear?

With such a graphicly bold foreground, maybe the sky background could be something with a blue sky and white clouds.

-jeremy


#3

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