Revising some old work. Would love critiques!


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It’s funny how you do something that you think is good, not look at it for a long time, then look at and realize it’s a pile of poop! Although I don’t have the older works to show, I’ve kept the same concept on both and re did the animation. There are several things I see is wrong but I felt like getting some thoughts at this stage. Please tear it apart as I’ll only learn from it. Thanks in advance.

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