Recent Personal MP

#1

Hi everyone,

 This is my first post here, need to hear some feedback for this one so i can improve my work in the future. thank you!

[b]Big Res here :[/b] [http://www.multisiv.com/mp/Bab_imlil/Bab_Imlil_HR.jpg](http://www.multisiv.com/mp/Bab_imlil/Bab_Imlil_HR.jpg)

[b]Final MP
[img]http://www.multisiv.com/mp/Bab_imlil/Bab_Imlil_02.jpg[/img]

[/b][b]Original Plate
[/b][b][img]http://www.multisiv.com/mp/Bab_imlil/star_plate.jpg[/img][/b]

[b]Foreground Element[/b]
[b][img]http://www.multisiv.com/mp/Bab_imlil/star_plate_02.jpg[/img]

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#2

Looks good:-)

-Probably u should put some fog in between mid ground and foreground it will give you the depth
-Mid ground and foreground mountain are same color value I think you should make mid ground mountain lighter
-Placing your subject in center is the wrong way…may be it works sometime…try working on rule of thirds

Hope this helps
Girish

#3

Thank you so much for your feedback, I really appreciate it! ur tips realy help me a lot to make my work better.

thanks for your time :slight_smile:

#4

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