readers are leaders short commercial wip

#1

:wip: small commercial for kids, a group of friends and my self are working on. It’s for this company sort of like D.A.R.E and the sort, for promoting kids a bright future. I am doing the animation for this. It is almost done still missing polishing and curve tweaks. I 'd like to you what you guys think and any suggestions. each shot has to be with in 3-4 secs due to the over all thing is 30 sec long. the remote scene had to be one sec to make the cut. here are 3 of 4. the last one is in the works.

Here are the boards they sent us for it.


:wip:

scene one : http://vimeo.com/15381065

scene two: http://vimeo.com/15381384

scene three: http://vimeo.com/15381652

Again any input is much appreciated.:smiley:

#2

Good job, sir!
Keep doing the good work. I don’t think I have any critiques to do so far.
Which software are you using?

#3

Thank you syunikiso. I am using maya. I will be posting the new updates and fourth scene , hopefully by sunday. I ll keep you posted. thanks for your reply.

#4

Hi there alfamike!

Any news from this work?

#5

Hi syunikiso. yes will post the up date to night . I waiting for the upload to finish.

#6

here is an update
http://vimeo.com/17719560

#7

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