Park Ji Yeon koren star

#1

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photoshop CS3
4 hours.
wacom bamboo

#2

Your rendering is a bit smudgy in some areas and need some more finesse (the form shadow at the left side of her face). The wings of her nose also seem arbitrarily soft, as if out of focus. The direction of her eyebrow’s growth also looks strange. The hair on the eyebrow usually does not turn direction until further towards the outer edge, while you have it turn almost immediately.

#3

I think you’ve done a beautiful job on this so far!

There are a few things that catch my eye. The hair looks a little unpolished, and wirey. (I tend to do this as well. :(… )

The other thing I noticed was her left eye (right for us viewers) looks off. The eyelash line doesn’t go all the way under her hair and it looks a little flat.

Also the hair is very crisp looking but the shoulders and arm are blurry. I’d make them match the hair.

#4

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