Ok guys sorry for the long wait, here’s two more
ewkn yours is up next 
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"PAINTOVER PLEASE" - painted crits on demand - with Steven Stahlberg
Stahlberg
#541
Katrigan
#544
Wow !! Thank you very much Mr Stahlberg, my image is so magic now, really you make it more “in” ! This is really wonderful.
aldog
#547
It’s kind of hard for me to figure out how caught up you are, I don’t want to post one right now if there’s already a huge line, so I’m sorry if there is.
here’s my image
I think there doesn’t need to be too much explanation with it, but I’ll do what I can.
I wanted to do something that was me and my friend because we call each other “super hero buddies”, so this is supposed to be him, but everything just seems off, it doesn’t seem pleasing to the eye. I dunno, I just love all of your paintovers, and want to get your point of view on it, maybe it will help push me in the right direction once I start drawing me in there.
Oh and I’ve gotten alot of comments on the lighting being off, so let’s just say I’m not SET on having that background, if you feel it should be completely different, do what you wil
yueyume
#549
Wow, thank you so much! Compared to your paintover my lighting looks so bland. 
The clouds look more pleasing to the eye now too.
Thanks again!
And by the way, I really like ewkn’s painting and what you did to it too. The fire looks awesome. 
Gabe
#551
Here’s another character that could use a critique.
I’m not happy with how the skin turned out.
Here is the full size version.
http://home.comcast.net/~gabe687/Jin.jpg
800 pixel wide one is in the thumb nail below.
cuddlesmcsavage
#552
wow, its seems like steven’s got quite the waiting list. unfortunately im in need of some proper critiqueing pronto, so if anyone’s willing to help out please go here http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=399888
and tear it to shreds if you have to! thanks guys!
Stahlberg
#553
Here are three more entries. First this one: as you see not a big difference, didn’t think there was that much I could improve there
Then pic #160, the two fighting robots:
And last the rat warrior - again no major changes, just small tweaks
Grugi, I’m sorry but your image is very difficult for me to paint over. It would just be some minor things like blurring the eyebrows more toward the center, maybe retouch the hair… but that’s not very helpful, because hair is damn hard to do in 3d as I well know, and I’m sure you can see for yourself that the hair is a little stylized right now. I think her basic facial shape looks very good. I couldn’t improve on that. Perhaps some more work on the hair, and skin textures…?
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whiterat
#554
THANK YOU. …!!:buttrock::buttrock:
Small tweaks but a Great outcome. I can see now were are my flaws and I can correct them.
Thank you again!!
Stahlberg
#555
Another image - I tried to relax her pose, make the mushroom more comfortable, and remove the strong contrasts for a more ‘fantasy’ look. Outlines aren’t necessarily wrong, it’s just these were quite thick and 100% black, I thought it would look more fitting without them.
edit:
One more:
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umbrellasky
#556
Hi Stahlberg, this is a piece that I created quite a while ago. I’ve been trying to improve the colours but nothing I do seems to work. I think her skin tones look a little grey.
I’d be truly grateful if you could see anyway of improving this piece, just to finish it off.
Thanks for your time.
Oh and the girl is supposed to be Snow White
[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v700/enialadam/snowwhiteGFX.jpg[/img]
aldog
#559
WHOA.
That’s such an incredible difference
thank you so much
I keep looking at your changes and than it switches back to mine and i’m like…awwwww=/
THANKS alot!
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