Hello Mr. Stahlberg
thank you so much for doing this. I’ve wanted to post this picture for a while, but I tried to finish it as much I can before that. Unfortunately I’m pretty stuck now…would you please take a look? 
I think on most of the paint overs the most striking thing you change is the overal lighting, which really improves/creates the mood. Well this painting (which is a fan piece actually) is one that needs a lighting fixer upper…I wanted to have three light sources, but I can’t seem to make it work. There’s the sun, the gunfire from the gun shes holding, and they’re supposedly falling into something like a “digital world” (eek doesn’t that sound cheesy :p), which emits a blue glow. Can the blue glow be added without making it too complicated?
Also, I tried to add movement by making their hair flow a bit, but it didn’t really work, so if I was to add something like motion blur, do you have any tips as to where to add it? Or is there a better way to create some movement?
Other than that…is anything else that should be changed?
Well thank you so much for looking at this, I reeally appreciate you doing this. 