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#1

This is a conceptpainting done in photoshop. I desided to create a 3-D model as well. So here is the result. Its quite different from the painting. Give me some critics if you like.
Cheers, Franz

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#2

the conceptpainting is really good and beatifull !
the 3d is good to, but not the same univers…the 2d seems to be created by an artistic spyder and the second, by http://www.jacobdelafon.com ( sorry :slight_smile: )
i love the render .
marc :applause: :thumbsup: :applause:


#3

Thanks vision, you are right there is definetely missing some detail in the model.


#4

Hi Franz! I love the bidimensional concept.

to me it’s too undefined respect the 3D nad that’s why it is
so misterious.
Try a different texture and a different approach both to camera position and to lighting setup.

IMO I say that the power of the concept is in the mountain walls,
and the tiny pillars under the structure seen from the bottom…

you could do a great job of compsiting I think!
let us know and thanks for posting!
Davhub


#5

thanks for taking a close look at my work, Ill take your avdvise!


#6

Do not forget to put the cables and wires!! :slight_smile:

And to avoid reflections… :slight_smile:

Sorry for the mispellings of my previous message,
glad if you are now aware of something else about your work!

Davhub


#7

I won´t but give me some time I need to work on my diploma right now. :sad:


#8

great. how long do you´ve to scribble to get a clear view of that design (finish it)


#9

Thanks Black Angel, I think the painting took me about 10 hours. :thumbsup:


#10

the 3D looks a bit like the guggenheim museum with the outer shell ripped off :slight_smile:
nice though

i like the concept drawing!


#11

imo the render is missing the organic look of the concept art but i think with the right background and a little bit more detail it could look nearly as good as your photoshop work.:thumbsup:


#12

I love it man. Great work:love:


#13

Cbas, thanks!
Mokka you are probably right about that. If I had more time I would keep working on details.
Liq, :love: :love:


#14

Just bloody amazing, im only 18, i really got to raise my game before i can even think about tryin to get a job.


#15

Don´t worry Dave, I think so myself from time to time. There will always be somebody better than you. As long as you do what you like you will get along! :bounce:


#16

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