Original Gangster, we are.


#1

Hi to all that read this.
So I figured out how to attach my image but how do I get it in the post like everyone else?

I am new to checking out these WIP forums… So I am kind of stoked to get some good feedback, hopefully.

Does anybody no the answer to this: Will my image atomaticly not be excepted to the 2d gallery because it is a play on a character that already exists? I like to mess around with other peeps characters in different ways.
For example:
In my portfolio I have a really gangster captain america also a very down and out wonder woman etc.???

Also any feedback would be much appreciated. This was the first time I did rain, so any help on that?

Thanks all,
keep arting!!


#2

The Showcase Gallery acceptance is based on quality–you have to be at a certain level artistically in order to get pass the judging panel (generally speaking, roughly professional level).

You can submit fan art–that’s fine.

As for the image, the lighting isn’t convincing. It appears your main dominant light source is the lightsaber, but you have a lot of bright diffused lighting that don’t conform to this lighting scheme. If there is another light source, such as an ambient light, then it has to look consistent. Right now, the amount of light on the flowers don’t match the dark form shadows on Yoda, and tree also seems to have another light source. Overall all, it’s a bit confused and incoherent. The composition also seems a bit cramped for no good reason. Give this scene a bit more breathing room so the flow of eye-leading reads better.


#3

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