Wow, a lot of great starts here!
Spirit Dreamer,
Great to see your progression sequence, and thanks for all the step~by~step explanations…that is really useful and interesting! Perfect for this thread.
I really like your last piece a lot, the atmosphere looks suitably steamy, and the light source is very clear. It will be great to see where this goes! Definitely keep posting WIP shots, as it helps us all. 
well ocean,
No problem! Look forward to your posts! :)
Samanthie,
Great start so far! I think the face may look a bit feminine at this point, but I know how quickly these paintings can change…the big thing I would recommend is to double~check the basic axes of the figure and get those to line up before rendering. Looking good so far! 
jrr,
ROFL, whoops, getting senile in my old age! :scream: Hope you will join us in future OFDWs, or attempt the other 2 poses. :)
Vahn,
Great to see you here! :) I have really enjoyed watching your new painting style develop, and I'm happy that you're starting to study anatomy. No better way to start than by just jumping in! You have a really great start here, and I would love to see you investigate this new style and pushing it further through rendering.
I would recommend getting rid of the white bkgrd. I know it looks nice with your painting style, but I think in order to really push this piece forward in terms of values, you need to fill the bkgrd with a neutral tone so that you can build the values of the figure in relation to them. You can always remove the bkgrd later, but it helps to have it there as a reference for all other values of the figure as you are painting.
I would say just keep working on this, and make sure to watch the major axes of the body…and just closely observe both the overall mass of the body in relation to the smaller details. Keep pushing forward with this, and I think we could see something really nice! Focus less on the flash of the picture and it’s effect than on getting the overall pose and the details right…and your piece will be very strong!
Thanks for all your nice comments, and I look forward to seeing your update! :)
DrawMonger,
Great to see you back for OFDW 004, and I think you have a great start! The overall attitude of the pose looks great, and it just remains to see if you will start a painting of this pose, and where this will lead you.
Looking forward to your update! :)
Cheers, :)
~Rebeccak