New After effects & photoshop matte painting

[ekraja]

Here’s a matte painting I did in photoshop then brought into after effects.

Video:
http://www.vimeo.com/3214881

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIQoQuL_AsE

Image:

[xxbinxx]

Nice one I think you should put more Cloud in the front

[JJASSO]

I think you have a very good base here, but attention to detail is needed, I see some white edges on the buildings, and all that warm color from the sunset should be even , soem of the clouds have a more orange and the base rock looks more magenta, this pops up , also some lights on the buildings and some nice reflections highlights from the sun would be cool, you need more foreground clouds to sell the scale effect, and maybe some flying cars or traffic would look great and give more dynamic feeling to it, hope this helps, I like better the contrast on the youtube video

[ekraja]

Thank you for the suggestions, I hope to take this sites critiques to help better my skills. I look forward to advancing with my future projects.

I think you have a very good base here, but attention to detail is needed, I see some white edges on the buildings, and all that warm color from the sunset should be even , soem of the clouds have a more orange and the base rock looks more magenta, this pops up , also some lights on the buildings and some nice reflections highlights from the sun would be cool, you need more foreground clouds to sell the scale effect, and maybe some flying cars or traffic would look great and give more dynamic feeling to it, hope this helps, I like better the contrast on the youtube video

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