My latest graduate demoreel

#1

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gQQlmbQxEpA&feature=response_watch

feel free to comment, I still yet to break into the industry.

I still have a lot to learn, but I am determine to break in soon :slight_smile:

#2

if you can, leave me a rating or a comment of what you think of my work under the video :slight_smile:

#3

no comment at all? oh well. guess I will try harder next time.

#4

hey Franklin nice demo and great breakdown, you did a great job in the geometry and projection, first what I think looks cheap is the lens flare you are using looks too simple or photoshop style, if you are usinf after effects try knoll light factory those are the best lens flares ever, also the general look is kind of sketchy , I guess you need to lose detail and contrast in the far background mountains, I would work in a more interesting detailed sky as well, I think the scale might be off a little bit if that hanging bridge is going from that tower to a far away mountain it should be gigantic and maybe have lots more of detail, or just make it smaller, the second one is good eventhough it is a dylan cole’s Idea and tutorial, you did a nice and different lighting/mood to it, I think the ocean needs some more highlights now looks too flat, these are just some pointers but great work in your demo keep it up !

#5

Thanks jaime :slight_smile:

This is the first time I have done a 3d camera map, so I didnt really set up the geometry correctly to show off the scale, but I am thinking of re doing the entire camera map, since I understand the concept a bit more.

I think I will take off the dylan cole inspired matte next time, since I want to show that I passed the learning from gnomon dvd stage.

I appreciate your critic, that really helps.

#6

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