Kind of but not really.
When you’re an animator working with mocap it’s your job to build upon the mocap to clean it up and make it better. This can mean blending clips together but also making it work better for that scene by adjusting certain poses and motions. So the aim of your reel is to really show off how you’ve improved the mocap from the original data. At the moment it looks like you’ve got motion data and put it on a model but the hands aren’t animated and the feet slip around a little bit with no weight. They’re the kind of things that I would be trying to show on my reel.
I’d be interested to hear from other people for their opinions as well though because I’ve worked with mocap on a couple of projects but it’s certainly not my main area.
Hope it helps though
Trav