this was a project for class that i had to do. we had to tell a story using flash animation. I know theres a few glitches here and there but i was just wondering what everyones general opinion of it is. I dont really plan on doing that much flash in the future…
thanks in advance for comments:applause:
ok, i’m gonna be harsh here… because i think it’ll help you do MUCH better next time.
first of all… it’s WAY TOO SLOW… the music is pretty fast paced, and i felt like i wanted to see some good slashing action… but the main guy was moving at wayyyy less than zombie speeds. the music was rockin’ away though!
secondly, there was a floating pixel somewhere to the right of the stage during the “sword dude’s” rising… it was really taking away my attention from the rest of your animation.
thirdly, i didn’t understand the story… two dudes go into a house… and i assume they get slashed up… or was it that they two dudes slashed up the other dude? i dunno… maybe part 2 will reveal everything…?
lastly, it was WAY TOO SLOW…
good try for your first… next time use some storyboards and some references… i guarantee it’ll be 1,000 times better =)
peace dude!
hey thanks for the comments
yea i know the story got a lil jumbled, i had to decide whether to work on this some more or study for my other finals that i have early next week…
I am going to fall asleep. I kept waiting and waiting and waiting for something to happen. And then when it did I was so tired I just closed it… Sorry!!:thumbsdow
I’m not really sure what the story you were going for here was. Also, watch your edges on all of the frames, more than half of them were off.
this is cool stuff, nice music 
surprising too. hehe… really, this is kinda slow :shrug:
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