Moon Cafe.

#1

This will be a catalog for one fashion designer. It’s the first work. Hope you’ll like it.

#2

welcome to the forums Dimitriy, it looks nice, I would like to see just the background matte painting with out the foreground elements, just to see the details and effects and everything, I think your foreground elements need some better integration though

looking forward to see the backdrop :slight_smile:

#3

Thank you. It’s a pity you don’t like the way the foreground is integrated, I tried to compose them good… I think you don’t like the fence that is in a warm gamma. Here is the background you asked for

#4

looking good, I never said I didn’t like the FG elements I just said that they need some more work for a good integration, actually I think you need some more interactive lighting from the moon lamps you have in the fence, good job !

#5

Oh, thank you for an advice. I think you’re right. Many things can be done to make this work better. It’s my first matte painting, so I will do my best to do the following works much better. Thanx! :slight_smile:

#6

I’ll say it again – top notch stuff :thumbsup:

#7

Thanx! Spasibo!

#8

Awesome for a first matte!

#9

Thanks a lot

#10

Frist matte? Well your doing pretty well so far.

I just saw one bit though that might help. You seem to have too much of a fog on the background mouintains on the left side. You might coonsider lowering that down a bit. or have the same effect on the other side, but you would loose all that detail.

Hope this helps, cheer man!

#11

Oh, thanks a lot! I think you’re right about fog. I thought it would add some atmosphere, but maybe I overdid it. Thank you for your attention.

#12

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