March 2015 - Karlie Carpentier Rosin

#1

Hey all!
I’m a bit late on entering, but after long weeks of overtime I finally have 4 days off and decided to have fun with this month’s theme!
I went through some old pics from a trip to LA 3 years ago and chose this as my plate.Then I had fun with photos and painting to set a concept I liked.
I wanted to go with the idea that we are in one of the more luxurious areas of the complex… I felt like even though it’s set in the future, it could be so far into the future that these styles of houses are back in fashion. Still debating weather I should put all this under some sort of dome of leave it in the open… and not sure what I’ll do with the left side of the building. I want to add more vegetation in the complex as well - like wall gardens… and a waterfall, even though thats not really up to DMP maybe it can be a suggestion for ‘FX’ ?? :smiley:

any ideas, or comments are obviously welcome! thanks in advance :slight_smile:

#2

Hey Karlie , good to see you again…

Santa Monica? :slight_smile:
Looks cool!.. fun,… almost amusement park like.

My thoughts … if your not to far into it :smiley:
I kept wanting to focus in of the slide type canopy and just to the right of that… Which makes me feel like it should be cropped slightly left or right?.. the almost center is weird I think…

Love those BG buildings
I feel there might be some cool openings that could lead you through on the second level as it goes back to the whole apartment/park areas…
Just a suggestion
I did a really rough paint over for what I mean…

What I Mean

Good luck and enjoy your 4 days :smiley:

#3

Hey Kyle! good to see you here too!

Thanks a lot for your feedback! so cool that you took the time to paint over, and what you did is awesome!!! looks wayyy better haha, kinda makes me curious to see what you could have done with it moving forward :stuck_out_tongue:

This is extremely helpful :slight_smile: i will definitely adjust myself to this feel. If you’re ok with that obviously - I actually havn’t had time to touch it since so I’m still in the lets change everything phase

I’m gona go check out your work! have a good day Kyle and thanks again, much appreciated

(and yes its SantaMonica!! haha good guess :stuck_out_tongue: )

#4

Your concept has a lot of variety in architectural styles and lots of potential, I hope you get time to finish!

#5

Hey Daazed !
thanks for the feedback and encouragement! I hope so too ! haha

Here’s a wip of where I’m at for whomever has time for feedback. I went in the direction that Daniel suggested (thanks again!! and ps sorry I called you Kyle last time)

Good luck to everyone! there’s some nice work! not many people seem to have participated though but I hope many get to finish :slight_smile:

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/bpzvmvebssz7f2x/AABzQUfOFAcqBqkcUwm01md3a?dl=0

I’ll post a final wip tonight before my finshing touches… Hopefully it turns out.
Karlie

#6

Heloo
well I had fun with this - could have put way more time into it to make it worthy but didn’t have enough of it :frowning:
feedback is welcome! gluck everyone, im off to sleep :smiley:

Here it is:
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/obfl1smu6s73o93/AACZ7qqrLH8m6H7xtRZ3F2YMa?dl=0

Gnight and Gluck!

#7

Wow …You took this pretty far with limited time…Nice work!

No worries…Most friends call me Kyle anyhow :slight_smile:

#8

just saw this now! thanks that’s nice! I wanted to polish it up and add more sci fi stuff … oh well

next time :smiley: