lip sync animation

#1

hey guys,

i would really appreciate some feedback on this lip sync animation i’ve been working on.

it’s one of the 11-second club clips from awhile back.

any comments/sugguestions are welcome.

thanks. =)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_Gc6q-4iQ8w

#2

This is a bit of a tricky one to comment on because I’m not exactly sure where you’re at with it. It seems half blocked and half not so I’ll just say a couple of things and if I’m wrong then feel free to ignore me.

-Animation wise, the big hand movement on “town” is a bit confusing to me. This might be clearer as you add more detail to the animation but at the moment it doesn’t read very well.
-I’m also not sure about who she’s talking to. Even if the other character is off screen you should think about where he/she is.
-I also think it’d be nice to pull the camera out so we can see a bit more of the character.

Hope that was maybe some kind of help and good luck with it.

#3

Thank you for your comments Mr Ramsdale.

I’ll keep the points you made in mind when I make my revision.

Thanks again.

#4

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