layout needing a quik crit

#1

Hi im going to be porting this to flash but wanted your opinions before i did it…

there will be no animation really at all i just like the dynamic linking options that flash has…

anyways tell me what you think…

#2

I like the design but it seems a little foggy looking…
Maybe just the way I’m looking at it…:thumbsup:

#3

Yeah, its quite foggy.

I would make the grey (text, lines etc.) brighter, nearly white, and change the color of the “polygons” to … another one. BUT NOT TO OVERCAST SKY COLOR!!!:slight_smile: (grey+blue) … cause as I see it’s the most favourite designers’ color (I guess) …:slight_smile:
Am I right?

#4

Not enough contrast, and that exploded 3D thing is about 1year gone. The text is difficult to read.

#5

I agree. It looks like your trying hard to be like everyone else about a year ago.:cool:

#6

My critique would be that the text is impossible to understand, also the exploding thing is a little old beside you have the banner up at top doing pretty much the same thing and the center of both pieces are right underneath eachother. I like the grid idea but I think it could be pushed further. maybe take out the exploding blue piece or make it more subtle. I do like the color scheme.

Love to see your improvements

#7

hello there,

well i thought it was good approach but those three boxes out on the right and the bottom has cut corners on the wrong side perhaps? it’s shifting weight looks sort of unstable.

:beer:

#8

Not bad for a flash layout :slight_smile:

Everyone has to start out somewhere :smiley:

#9

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