Hello everyone. New to this site and just recently added my artwork. I received an email suggesting that I post it in the “work in progress section”.
I’d really appreciate some feedback, crits and suggestions on how this piece can be improved.

Hello everyone. New to this site and just recently added my artwork. I received an email suggesting that I post it in the “work in progress section”.
I’d really appreciate some feedback, crits and suggestions on how this piece can be improved.

This could be the cover for a metal band CD. 
I had to look twice to see that the blue fog comes from his staff and not from the circle thingy. It’s a bit unfortunate that the staff end right on the circle.
Maybe it would be more readable if you put a light source at the end of the staff, to accentuate that this is where the fog comes from.
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