Just need some feedback and direction


I have been trying to get hired as a character artist or maybe a prop artist and work my way to character art. I have applied many times and have gotten close. I sometimes write letters just asking on what I can improve upon but never get a reply. So if there are any people out there working in 3d if you could give me some feed back on what I need to do or maybe an example of a visible goal to work towards I would greatly appreciate it.

Here is my portfolio link on Artstation. Thank you in advance for taking the time.